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European Memories

I never knew you, you never knew me.
It started out so simple, back then.
Who would have thought, that we
Would get together when
I fell asleep on your shoulder.
We started out on the cruise,
Though outside was colder,
I followed you with a bruise
On my heart. Days seemed shorter
Even if we were together.
We crossed the behavior border,
Because your touch was like feather.
I miss your Calvin Klein cologne.
Now I feel all alone.
:iconbelovednekoxloveless:

Author's Comments

I had to write a sonnet for my Creative Writing class, and I decided to write this :heart: This is somewhat about my trip in Europe. And this is about me and this guy i met :]
This is my poem so no stealing D:<

Inspired by :iconlt-raphael-comet:

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:iconlt-raphael-comet:
:cries: That...was....so...beautiful! I didn't know you were also a poet. Or was it just for the class. Either way that was an amazing poem. :clap: Ooo, I'm surprised you remembered the maker of the cologne as well. ^_^ I hope you get an A on this. :D

Just some editing snipits for some thought.

1.) On the 3rd line 4th word. Should that be "thought" or is it supposed to be "though.

2.)On the 12th line should it be "like a feather" or is it the way you intended.

Ok, I'm done. Thanks for writing about me!

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:iconbelovednekoxloveless:
oh fack....3rd line was suppose to be 'thought' omg D: and on the 12 line it`s fine the way it is :P and yes i`m a poet/writer/artist ^-^

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:iconlt-raphael-comet:
I'm just a writer/artist. I can't really get my hands around the concept of poetry....^^;

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:blackrose:>Raphael Comet<:blackrose:
:salute: A proud supporter of the Cornerian Military:salute:
Best person ever!! [link]
:iconbelovednekoxloveless:
i`m learning about poetry in creative writing so i know something about it :3

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"Bite me! Or better yet, let me bite you!"
"I'll bite you to death."
:iconingwa:
CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE!!! nice one !!:hug:

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